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Re: Let Me In
I didn't realise I'd already read this poem just last night until I saw the words. I guess what Im trying to say is a good title counts. The words ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Leave Out All The Rest *contest entry*
Wow! Well, i hate being such a freaking critic so Im not gonna go deep into what went wrong in your story. All I can say is, keep it up! ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Sleep
Okaay, first things first. The opening was not quite effective and by effective, I mean one to pull the reader right in. It was fine up until the point when ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: When the world finally goes silent
This is a very beautiful poem! The way every object seems to be doing quite the opposite of what it is supposed to, forms a generally attractive and pleasing concept. ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
[quote] know that i hurt you, but baby, im sorry, i never meant to hurt you Readers dont really get a sense of meaning here maybe because of the almost ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Looking for good books (preferably vampire)
Ive Got 2 Books 4 u. Both R AMAZING. The 1st one: Bad Blood by Rhainon Lassiter [hope i spelled her name right :P] It's not about vamps but its ...
Mar 13, 2009